Has anyone ever told you that your eyes
Are worth falling from heaven
To gaze into at least once?
Your smile is worth a million words
All pertaining to the description
Of what beautiful is and ought be.
Men would travel the longest distances
Just to be able to feel the texture of your skin.
They would wait, starve, and die, if need be
To experience only the taste of your lips.
The smell of your hair keeps men moving,
And the pleasant rapture of running their fingers
Through your hair haunts them in their dreams.
You are the Eve of beauty,
The first creature to ever leave the word “perfect” as insufficient,
And the only to capture the true essence of love at first sight.
I speak to you with nothing less than honesty
For you are all of what my heart tells me to be good.
I’ve journeyed a lifetime searching for happiness
And have found that the trail ends inside your arms.
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“Has anyone ever told you that your eyes
Are worth falling from heaven
To gaze into at least once?”
If a man ever said this to me I’d be in shock. These lines are beautiful and would make anyone feel exalted. The author is obviously praising this person and loves them very much. This poem should be someone’s vowels at a wedding. In fact, I might use this poem for my own wedding and give special thanks to you. The tone of this poem is powerful and heartfelt. You can feel the sincerity and love towards one single person. The most angelic lines are
“I’ve journeyed a lifetime searching for happiness
And have found that the trail ends inside your arms.” They make your heart melt and make you freeze in awe. Some forms of figurative language would be
“Your smile is worth a million words
All pertaining to the description
Of what beautiful is and ought be.” This is an example of a metaphor because it’s comparing all of the exquisite and admirable words to someone’s smile. Another would be
“Men would travel the longest distances
Just to be able to feel the texture of your skin.
They would wait, starve, and die, if need be
To experience only the taste of your lips.” This is a hyperbole because it’s exaggerating the extent that men would go to just feel this person and experience one kiss. This a well written, excellent and detailed poem.
“The first creature to ever leave the word “perfect” as insufficient.”
Mr. Donoso, I have to say you have captured me once again with another magnificent poem. How lovely it was! When I read the lines of the poem mentioned above I thought that the lady must be extremely beautiful for someone to say something like that. I mean, perfection is the ultimate thing, the best there can be, and it is very difficult to be perfect. But, this person is so extraordinary that the word “perfect” is not enough to describe her. It is definitely a wonderful line.
The tone of this poem is loving and candid. For me to show why the poem is loving I would have to type it all, but here are two lines that completely demonstrate this (and are two of my favorite lines): “I’ve journeyed a lifetime searching for happiness/ And have found that the trail ends inside your arms.” That was the perfect ending for the poem. There are two lines that clearly show why it is such an honest poem: “I speak to you with nothing less than honesty/ For you are all of what my heart tells me to be good.” Indeed, the author expresses himself without withholding any of his romantic feelings.
“You are the Eve of beauty” is an example of a metaphor. Eve was supposedly a beautiful woman. Therefore, she was like the best example of beauty. In this case, the author is comparing the lady to Eve, which means the lady is as astonishing as her, which in turn represents beauty. (Hopefully I’m right and was able to express myself coherently.) Another example of figurative language is the line, “Your smile is worth a million words,” because there is a comparison between all the sweet words that exist to her awe- striking smile.
I like the poem immensely because it is straightforward when the man is saying his feelings towards her and they are put in a poetic way. Take for instance the first three lines of the poem, “Has anyone ever told you that your eyes/ Are worth falling from heaven/ To gaze into at least once?” You are saying that her eyes can captivate anyone but in a more romantic way. Those words are ones that any girl would love to hear and I agree with the anonymous writer when she said, “If a man ever said this to me I’d be in shock.” It is an adoring poem whose words will stay in my mind for a very long time.
“You”
“They would wait, starve, and die, if need be
To experience only the taste of your lips.”
These particular lines in the poem affected me greatly; they stood out to me, and my admiration towards them increases with every read. These lines made me think the poet is speaking of a person, particularly a woman who is so beautiful, so ridiculously lovely that any man would go to such extremes as to starve themselves, wait until the end of time and even die just to experience “only the taste of her lips”, meaning only to kiss her. These lines also made me reflect not only on the perfection of a single person that would make one want to wait so long for another, but also what a kiss could mean from that single person.
The tone of this poem is undoubtedly appreciative. The poet is admiring this woman, whom he believes is an angel from Heaven, who is so worthy and perfect that man would do the unimaginable only to be with this woman. For example, the line “Your smile is worth a million words” proves this poem to be loving. It is showing that the poet respects this woman for all her greatness; he admires her and is conveying that in the poem.
“Your smile is worth a million words”
These lines are an example of a metaphor. When the poet writes, “Your smile is worth a million words,” he is saying that when the woman he is referring to is happy, and upon her face a smile shows, that very smile is worth a million words in the sense that not a single word can be used to describe it’s beauty. That smile is so vibrant that it holds so an unbelievable amount of meaning.
Yes, I absolutely loved this poem. It makes me think of that person who I believe has fallen from Heaven, who has brought me to appreciate them, everything they do and all that they stand for. This poem also captures the amount of admiration that the poet has for this woman that he is referring to, it not only allows me to imagine her beauty, but it shows how much the poet cares for her.
I agree with Anonymous when they say, “In fact, I might use this poem for my own wedding and give special thanks to you.” That’s actually amusing, but maybe I’ll consider it! However, I felt that this poem was powerful and that it may be used at a wedding to depict one’s affection towards their love is quite realistic.
“You are the Eve of beauty, the first creature to ever leave the word “perfect” as insufficient.” When I first read this line it made me smile because that was a clever way to describe the true beauty of a person. This line made me low inside with happiness and love. The way the poet described his lover as something that is so beautiful that perfect is not a sufficient word that would be able to describe her. The word that is rarely used because our society is pounded with the idea that no one is perfect, yet the poet was adequately secure that his lover was more than perfect. This to me shows intense feelings, feelings that can’t even be described with the best words that one can possibly use to describe someone. When I read this line it reminds me of the models you see on television and in magazines. These people are so perfect and beautiful that your speechless and don’t know how to maneuver your vocabulary and answer someone when you’re asked you how they look. These people seem to exist in a land far from ours, in a land where perfect is left insufficient.
I believe the poem was intimate, loving and reflective. “I speak to you with nothing less than honesty, for you are all of what my heart tells me to be good.” This line shows how the poet expresses feelings that one does not say to anyone. To tell someone that your heart is telling you that your lover is all that is good and that you yearning for them is something that one does not share with everyone. Therefore intimate feelings are expressed making this poem somewhat sincere.
“I’ve journeyed a lifetime searching for happiness, and have found that the trail ends inside your arms.” This line shows the extreme love that the poet feels for this one person. To feel and think that your life is meant to be with this person and that you want to grow old with this person by you side can only be matched with one feeling. The feeling is love is the only feeling that can make you feel that way. Also I believe the poem is reflective due to the way the poet has reflected upon his life and decided that all path’s do end in the arms of this one person.
“You are the Eve of beauty.” This line is a great example of a metaphor because the poet is comparing the person he loves to the Eve of Beauty. The poet does not use the words “like” or “as” but actually compares the two by stating that the lover is the Eve of Beauty. “They would wait, starve, and die, if need be, to experience only the taste of your lips.”
This is an excellent example of a hyperbole. It is an exaggeration because men wont actually wait, starve and die just to taste the lips of another person. The poet is trying to express the way that many men would go to the extreme just to kiss the tender lips of this one person. I do agree with what the first person to comment said about the line; “They would wait, starve, and die, if need be, to experience only the taste of your lips” being a hyperbole. A human person would not actually starve to death just so that they can kiss someone.
I loved this poem because of the way the poet expressed himself. Hyperboles can set the tone of a poem really well when it comes to strong emotions such as love or hate. The poet used many hyperboles, which truly helped him paint the picture in the reader’s mind and leave a hint of the intense feelings that were expressed through the poem.
I loved the usage of words and the complexity and deepness of the poet’s feelings. “The first creature to ever leave the word “perfect” as insufficient.” This was my favorite line and I have to just say, Mr. Donoso, what an excellent poem.
The line “You are the Eve of beauty, the first creature to ever leave the word “perfect” as insufficient” left me dazzled. It is the most beautiful line in the poem, any girl that hears this line is one of the luckiest. I’m speechless about the line it’s just so beautiful and has so much meaning to it. To me the line means that this guy truly believes this girl is the most beautiful possibly in the entire world. It is said that nobody is perfect but to him she is beyond perfection and left the word incomplete and lacking meaning with a whole new meaning. This line is truly amazing beyond all the others.
The tone of this poem is very romantic and appreciative. I can feel the author’s feelings for this person are very strong and he appreciates having her in his life. The line “I’ve journeyed a lifetime searching for happiness
and have found that the trail ends inside your arms” shows how the author waited very long to find a love like hers and he is happy the long search is over and it ended in her arms which he is happy for. The romance is shown all through the poem. The author took their time to write about how perfect a person is and that is love. A specific example would be “Men would travel the longest distances just to be able to feel the texture of your skin. They would wait, starve, and die, if need be to experience only the taste of your lips.” This line tells how she is very wanted and he expresses what they would do to have a bit of her love.
One form of figurative language would be in the line “Your smile is worth a million words all pertaining to the description of what beautiful is and ought to be.” Is a metaphor comparing their smile to the definition of beautiful and what it should be. The line “Has anyone ever told you that your eyes are worth falling from heaven to gaze into at least once?” is a hyperbole because I don’t believe anybody would actually be crazy enough to fall from heaven just to look at a persons eyes, I don’t even believe it is possible.
I love the poem. There is no doubt in my mind that this is the best poem you have wrote Mr. Donoso keep up the good work. I love how you talk about the beauty of this one person and how they are beyond all perfection the true meaning of beauty. This poem is so sweet! The girl that gets to hear this will fall in a heart beat no doubt about it =]
I agree with the second anonymous comment when they say “I mean, perfection is the ultimate thing, the best there can be, and it is very difficult to be perfect. But, this person is so extraordinary that the word “perfect” is not enough to describe her.” I believe this is a major point the author is trying to portray and did a wonderful job. =]
Honesty is a key for successful relationships. The lines “I speak to you with nothing less than honesty” really grabbed my attention. It causes me to think that when speaking with someone one using nothing less than honesty, one is truly speaking from their heart. I particularly took to attention this line because it deviates from the usual idea of love lines being about kissing, or things like deep rich colorful eyes. Instead of describing your admiration for someone the focus has changed to your dedication to them. Summoned up in one word brilliant.
The poem has the usual love theme but the tone is one of admiration. The beginning of the poem starts off with the beauty of the woman’s eyes. It continues with her smile, then her skin and so forth. This shows the admiration the author has for all this woman has to offer. The lines:
The first creature to ever leave the word “perfect” as insufficient,
And the only to capture the true essence of love at first sight.
demonstrate yet another tone in the poem. It is evident that it is awe-struck. The author implies the idea of love at first sight, that she captures its true essence. In order to get in to such a state one must be awe-struck, because the beauty must mesmerize one to such an extent that it overtakes the body and mind. I enjoyed this poem, much more than the usual love poems because it just has great concepts, like “traveling the longest distances”, or in simpler terms doing anything to be with her. Also that men are haunted by her in their dreams, or are mentally overtaken by her and can’t get her out of their heads.
The hyperbole of her smile being worth a million words, is exaggerated because I doubt that there a million adjectives in the English language, and even if there was how could one use them all in one lifetime to describe one thing. But still that just signifies how her smile is indescribable. Another hyperbole is that the author searched a lifetime for happiness and he finally found it, signifying that it took him forever to be with the one he believes he was meant for. It is a hyperbole because if anyone searched for a lifetime for something they would be dead upon the second they found it, since a lifetime is technically one’s whole life. I agree and disagree with anonymous that, “You are the Eve of Beauty” is a metaphor, yet it also resembles a pun. The play on words here is that Eve is taking from Hebrew to mean “life”, one could say that she gives life to the word beauty. Also Eve being the first woman on earth was described as beautiful and eve can mean the preceding or beginning part of something. That is a pun because it plays on Eve the name of the first woman and eve the regular word.
“The first creature to ever leave the word ‘perfect’ as insufficient”
The first impression the line imposed on me was a boggling affect. I literally had to read over the line a couple of times because my mind couldn’t see perfect-the great and wonderful perfect in which cannot be surpassed-to be insufficient. It oddly caught me off guard which in turn made me laughed at myself for not being able to comprehend the straightforward compliment at first glance. To reassure you, I deciphered its hidden meaning: The women being spoken about in the poem is so amazing that calling her perfect would not be sufficient, maybe so much as to be considered an insult like calling Donald Trump’s billion dollar 44-story towers a rat infested shack.
Numerous words can be used to describe the tone of this poem; complimentary, adoring, loving. But two words seemed to really capture the pure underlining tone, straightforward and entranced (to hold somebody's attention and produce a sense of wonder in that person). In the poem, I don’t feel as if you are holding back any of your feelings but I also do not feel as if you are speaking as a sergeant general who says this is this and that’s the way it is. The tone feels like deep thoughts being spoken aloud which gives me reason to believe that the tone is entranced. For example, in the lines, “I speak to you with nothing less than honesty, for you are all of what my heart tells me to be good.” The first part is saying that he, the poet, is being honest which is code for straightforward and the second part is one of many lines that is coated with awe-stuck that is equal to sounding
entranced.
“They would wait, starve, and die, if need be
To experience only the taste of your lips.”
I don’t want to stamp this as a metaphor because I don’t believe it is making a comparison but I will say I think it is a hyperbole because it is somewhat exaggerating the things men would do for a kiss from the mystery lady. I really liked how the naming of the sacrifices built up. It gave it a very strong, epic feeling.
“I’ve journeyed a lifetime searching for happiness
And have found that the trail ends inside your arms.”
I like to believe this line is saying that the poet has been on a path that leads to happiness in the dark without a flashlight but when he finally arrived at the end to finally receive pure happiness, he sees that it is the mystery ladies love. This is a metaphor and in laymen terms it is simply saying that the poet has been searching for a long time for a true joy in his life and seems to have found it in the love that the mystery women gives to him. A small touched that I liked about the lines was the use of trail to signify your journey and the traits that may have been similar to a trail like it could have split into three roads in which you had to choose which to journey down to or the weather on certain parts of the trail could have been less than satisfactory.
I found the poem to be very enjoyable, an easy read, and overall very sweet but it made me wonder how you could write about love so much. It is like within you, you have some kind of never ending source where your many poems derive from. Anyways, I liked the poem because the poet gave specific detailed examples of what she was worth. For example:
Has anyone ever told you that your eyes
Are worth falling from heaven
To gaze into at least once?
In the three lines, it gives a specific example of what gazing into her eyes was worth instead of just saying your eyes are magical or something similar. Throughout the poem there are other examples and it makes the poem have good amount of depth.
Someone who chose to stay anonymous said the poem sounds like vows for a wedding and I would definitely have to agree. The statement made me think of how on T.V. they make the task of writing your own vows to be a dreaded process but I realized that it is probably very easy because it is just a poem. If 15 year- olds can do it for English class then I’m sure adults can too. Especially because they are doing it about someone they love, it should just flow out naturally.
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“The first creature to ever leave the word “perfect” as insufficient,” was the first line that caught my eye while I was skimming. For the word perfect to not be enough to describe this girl she must be pretty darn special. Perfect means flawless, no thing can contest it or compete; nothing can stand to her. I loved the way this line sounded it just made me stop and think of how special this girl must be. Kudos! Even with the “mushy-gushy” you always make me like your poems.
I think the tone of this poem is loving and admiring. You are admiring this woman that you care for. “Has anyone ever told you that your eyes Are worth falling from heaven To gaze into at least once?” you are admiring how beautiful her eyes are. To admire someone this much you have to truly care about them and love them. “I’ve journeyed a lifetime searching for happiness
And have found that the trail ends inside your arms.” Shows that you have found love with this perfection.
In describing this beautiful woman you made sure to use plenty of figurative language. “Men would travel the longest distances Just to be able to feel the texture of your skin. They would wait, starve, and die, if need be To experience only the taste of your lips.” This has to be an example of a hyperbole because she sounds great and all but I doubt men would really go through all this trouble to be with her, maybe you, but not everyone. “You are the Eve of beauty,” is an example of a metaphor. You are comparing her to Eve who was said to be like the ultimate woman until she screwed everything up. She is the ultimate beauty.
I like this poem because it’s vivid with details. I can envision her beauty. I have to say it’s not my favorite you have written but it is good work. Seriously though could you write a few poems that aren’t all “mushy-gushy, lovey-dovey, want to puke it’s so sweet” poems, please? I’m just saying, you’re a good writer and I want to see what else you can do. Please just don’t fail me.
I agree with s when they said, “I found the poem to be very enjoyable, an easy read, and overall very sweet but it made me wonder how you could write about love so much. It is like within you, you have some kind of never ending source where your many poems derive from.” That is a question I have long wondered about. Where does all this come from really because that is a lot of love to be faking. Come on there must be some inspiration what or who is it?
“You”
“… Men would travel the longest distances Just to be able to feel the texture of your skin.”
This line made me think of an anime called “One piece” which is about pirates risking their lives on a trip across the sea to find a treasure left by the greatest pirate ever and even if the pirates just get a glimpse of it, they feel accomplished because of how they value that treasure.
“…Your smile is worth a million words/All pertaining to the description/Of what beautiful is and ought be.”
From this quote, I can determine that the tone of the poem is delicate and warm, as of a person telling their inmost feelings about the person they are in love with. This is obvious because the writer tells us of the person being extremely beautiful.
“…The smell of your hair keeps men moving, /And the pleasant rapture of running their fingers/Through your hair haunts them in their dreams.”
In this quote, the author uses what seems to be a hyperbole. This is a hyperbole because I think that the smell of somebody’s hair can’t literally keep a person moving but I think it’s the determination of that person to run their fingers through the female’s hair.
I like this poem because I think it was original and of good standing it was in relation with many things I know about and because it was easy to understand it and reading it is a time well spent.
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I agree with “Anonymous” this poem is well written, excellent and detailed, and the way you portrayed how men are was just genius. I guess since you just posted the poem up it was fresh and when it’s new that’s when it’s the best.
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“Has anyone ever told you that your eyes are worth falling from heaven to gaze into at least once? This first line is one hell of a line! It kind of sounds like a cheesy pick up line made into a beautiful line of poetry, not easy to do. The fact that you say at least once shows how strongly you feel towards these beautiful eyes, just one look would be worth falling for grace, as if one look in her eyes would set your world right. The tone of the poem is definitely passionate and romantic. The passion is shown in nearly every line when you give the details of her, saying her smile depicts what beautiful ought to be. There are some hyperboles in the poem such as “Men would travel the longest distances just to be able to feel the texture of your skin. They would wait, starve, and die, if need be to experience only the taste of your lips.” This is a hyperbole because I don’t believe that men would die for just one kiss, but it is a beautiful way of paining a picture of her true beauty in our (the reader) minds. Honestly I think this is a great poem, it seems that every week I’m finding a new poem to complement and come to love, these poems seem to just keep getting better, keep up the good work!! I agree with Wendy when she says that the line “You are the Eve of beauty, the first creature to ever leave the word “perfect” as insufficient” left me dazzled. It truly is an amazing line and maybe the best line in the poem, you can tell that to any girl and I’m betting she will blush. To think that you may have wrote that with one specific girl in mind just amazes me, that kind of beauty cant be faked, it cant be put on under any amount of make up and mascara. The bottom line, great poem, truly inspiring and thank you for writing it.
You
“Has anyone ever told you that your eyes are worth falling from heaven to gaze into at least once? This first line is one hell of a line! It kind of sounds like a cheesy pick up line made into a beautiful line of poetry, not easy to do. The fact that you say at least once shows how strongly you feel towards these beautiful eyes, just one look would be worth falling for grace, as if one look in her eyes would set your world right. The tone of the poem is definitely passionate and romantic. The passion is shown in nearly every line when you give the details of her, saying her smile depicts what beautiful ought to be. There are some hyperboles in the poem such as “Men would travel the longest distances just to be able to feel the texture of your skin. They would wait, starve, and die, if need be to experience only the taste of your lips.” This is a hyperbole because I don’t believe that men would die for just one kiss, but it is a beautiful way of paining a picture of her true beauty in our (the reader) minds. Honestly I think this is a great poem, it seems that every week I’m finding a new poem to complement and come to love, these poems seem to just keep getting better, keep up the good work!! I agree with Wendy when she says that the line “You are the Eve of beauty, the first creature to ever leave the word “perfect” as insufficient” left me dazzled. It truly is an amazing line and maybe the best line in the poem, you can tell that to any girl and I’m betting she will blush. To think that you may have wrote that with one specific girl in mind just amazes me, that kind of beauty cant be faked, it cant be put on under any amount of make up and mascara. The bottom line, great poem, truly inspiring and thank you for writing it.
Very beautiful, this is an excellently written testament to the beauty of this woman. A woman so beautiful, people would physically strain themselves to death the point of death, just for something as seemingly insignificant as a kiss. Of course, in this case, though, it it's a bit of a big deal ("...They would wait, starve, and die to experience only the taste of your lips...").
Exaggeration is put to good use here, with some of the exaggerations getting pretty over-the-top. My favorite is the one that shows that she has reached a level of perfection so high that she renders the word “perfect” unsuitable for describing it. Referring to her as the "Eve of beauty," a metaphor describing her as beautiful as the very first woman herself... or possibly just saying that she precedes beauty. You know what they say about writing; the writer's meaning is never the same as the reader's interpretation.
"They would wait, starve, and die, if need be, To experience only the taste of your lips."
This line makes me think of a Greek goddess of beauty like Aphrodite (I don't know if that's Greek or Roman), Eve, like you said or even those mermaid sirens underneath the water luring them to their doom, although this doesn't seem to be doom, but happiness. This line made me feel like men are always after beauty, which isn't always true I suppose. This line shows an example of figurative language through a hyperbole. Most people will not literally wait, starve or die just for a kiss and I can see it is exaggerated. In a less literal sense, I also see waiting, starving and dying as a metaphor for going to other great lengths to be with someone.
I think the tone of this poem is caressing and affectionate because the writer talks highly and lovingly of their significant other. "Your smile is worth a million words, All pertaining to the description, Of what beautiful is and ought be." This line is very affectionate as it talks about how great the woman's smile is, which shows throughout the poem. I agree with Bibi when she says "The poet is admiring this woman, whom he believes is an angel from Heaven, who is so worthy and perfect that man would do the unimaginable only to be with this woman." I don't think there is anything I could have added to make that to fit more perfectly with this poem. I thought this poem was interesting, especially reading the extent of the men's sacrifices, and it is pretty good. Unfortunately though, this is not my favorite poem of yours, but then again, I really like those of yours that are out there, that change and can be percieved differently every time you read it.
"Men would travel the longest distances
Just to be able to feel the texture of your skin."
I think this line means that this woman is so beautiful, that men from all over would do anything for her. They would travel just to simply feel her skin.
The tone of this poem is admiring. The poet has an apparent love for this woman, so he seems to notice every little detail about her. Haha, seems like a stalker. But more seriously, he finds this woman to be more than perfect and he explains her beauty in full detail.
"Has anyone ever told you that your eyes
Are worth falling from heaven"
This line is a simile because he poet basically says he would leave the best for this woman. This shows his intense love.
I agree with the first post when they say "They would wait, starve, and die, if need be
To experience only the taste of your lip," is a hyperbole, because the poet is exaggerating men's longing to kiss the woman.
I like this poem because it is very simple yet descriptive of how beautiful and wonderful one particular woman is.
This was an ok poem, ive read better from you dr.d. To me it seems you are trying to hard, go back to the flow of last year. 3/5 stars from me.
p.s this better be about a girl, because no where was she, her or a female name or pronoun used
I really liked this poem. Unfortunately I think that your forgetting that the way that a women looks would not make almost every man fall in love with her. (It’s unethical.) Her looks might scare some men and it might remind them that they don’t stand a chance with her because they have relationship problems and they keep getting dumped. I thought that you would remember that love is more than physical attraction. It is also mental, and spiritual. But overall I think that this was a very enthralling poem.
I think that maybe you should focus on how great of a person you are and how someone would be lucky to be with you because it seems that you haven’t found the meaning of happiness in your life even though everything is going really great for you right now. It’s Ok. Based on your poem is seems that you long for a lasting companion other than family and friends. Maybe you should focus on other things such as some of the conflicts that our economy is facing and how you could help out. For example, you could use the money that you receive from your awesome book “Words Like Bitter Sweet Chocolate” to help fund research for the cure for some incurable disease, cancer or to send money to an organization that helps the less fortunate.
My favorite line in the poem is “Has anyone ever told you that your eyes Are worth falling from heaven To gaze into at least once?” It's cheesy but funny.
I give this poem 5 thumbs ups. ;D
i still don't get the point of this crap
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